Thursday, November 30, 2006

The Fantasy

It's probably not a really good Christmas reading but if you're in the mood for some mild Christian horror, come and visit Perdition.

Honestly it's not that bad. We in writer world get behind our computers once a day and try to write at least 500 words. This fantasy tale began as just another day behind my laptop. It turned into three short chapters that might fit into a longer novel somewhere, someday. One can only fantasise.

Click on this link, The Whisperers: feedback is totally welcome. How can I improve this story? Edit me. Critique me. Be brutal. The target audience is sort of the Tween generation--14 and up. I've been thinking of just going the Lulu way with this. I've got some great illustrations. What say ye?

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